Please review. Nursery Mural/Painting

[diddy92]

Hi
I've set up a blog to post updates about my pregnancy etc (mainly to log memories and look back on in years to come)
Please could you leave me your thoughts & opinions on my blog please? It's very early days with setting it up so any feedback is welcome! Especially anything that could make it better?

daniellesteele92.blogspot.co.uk

Thanks!

[sciencevshollywood]

Hi Danielle,
Nice blog. Is this a blog about some personal journey that you are undertaking, is it going to be business related, or is it something to show off your talents? You are talented BTW.

While I think showing how you do your art is interesting, I don't think visitors are going to get a clear idea of what the goals or the aims of the blog is or what it's entirely about. Maybe an About section in the top menu that tells people a little about you and why you are doing this might people understand the purpose of your blog as well as help people get to know you.

You appear to have a sub-title "The Hidden Details" and others (well me) may wonder what the "hidden details" is all about. Maybe that can be part of the explanation of in your "About" section.

I am also new here and I have my own blog that I would love to get some feedback on. It's sciencevshollywood.com. If you are interested I would love to hear anyone's thoughts.

David